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Luna llena,
cumple tu reseña
de ser una doncella.
Dame tu pasión
para curar mi corazón.

Un corazón herido de bala
por algunas palabras
que el viento no voló.

Báñame con tu luz,
húndeme con la marea,
hasta encontrar
el fondo de mi dilema.
Lugar donde tu luz no llega,
pero tu amor se refleja.
©2009 ~Daknight
:icondaknight:

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My first spanish poem submission ^_^ Inspire by Renjiluvah to write in spanish I began to write this and finish it. I haven't done a spanish poem in a long time, mostly cause spanish is more tricky in term of grammar cause of the accents that english doesn't use.

For those that only know english, her is the translation (Keep in mind this is for knowing what is said in the poem and not actually done to rhyme compare to the spanish version)

Full mooon
acomplish your brief news
to become a lady.
Give me your passion
to cure my heart.

A heart wounded by bullets
shot by some words
that the wind didn't blow.

Bath me with your light
drown me with your tide
until I reach
the bottom of my dilema.
Place where your light won't reach,
but your love reflects.

Hope you like it, sure you would if you know spanish *lol* ^_^

_____

My primer poema en español despues de tanto tiempo. Inspirado por Renjiluvah para escribir en español este fue el primero que hize. Seguire escribiendo en español e ingles ya que me gusta. El español tiene muchas palabras que son dificil de consevir en ingles en mi opinion (y vice-versa tambien)

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:iconrubixchick:
Hey, I think I really like your Spanish poems over English. Maybe it's easier to write in your native language? It's funny bc before I scrolled down I was trying to see if I could translate it and I was like, okay, moon, give me your passion, curing my heart blah blah and I'd say I got half of it. :tears: I'm so proud of myself lmao. Nice work. It's a lot more abstract and I like the personification of the moon and the description about bullets. :D
:icondaknight:
Maybe is easier in the form of selecting words, but grammar is much tricker *lol*. Hope this help you out and I'll continue to write so you keep learning spanish ^_^

I wrote part of it in Unviersity when I look up and there was a full moon, I like doing them like that, but I also like a bit straight foward sometimes *lol*

--
Stand tall and shake the Heavens
-Xenogears
:iconrubixchick:
Who needs grammar in poetry? Lol I know what you mean. And thanks. It does help. :D

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